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All Deviations
All Deviations


I suppose I could be profound
For the first time
And say something inspirational,

But the seconds are winding down
And I've run out of
The metaphysical.


...And you're spinning around again.
...So I'm trying to help you land (on your feet).


And I guess that if you insist
I could smile
And since you're such the optimist,
I'd mean it, too.

But there's no ending yet in sight
To the sinking feelings
On these drowning nights


...And we're moving in close again
...Well I'm wishing you'd let me in, (finally).


I'm dreaming as smoke
Slips underneath the door
And slowly fills the room.

Your eyes ignite with
Smiles and something more
And I'm too scared to move.


...And I'm feeling real bold today
...So I'm searching for words to say (that you'll never hear)

[bridge]

...And I'm dreaming this dream again
...Where you're reaching out for my hand


I'm dreaming as smoke
Slips underneath the door
And slowly fills the room.

Your eyes ignite with
Smiles and something more
But I'm too scared to move.
©2005-2008 ~UnspokenRequest
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So I wrote this one about somebody. Deal with it. I had a dream and felt inspired and wrote the first song in forever. Comments are oh-so-appreciated, as always.
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=smoking-mirrors:iconsmoking-mirrors: Dec 20, 2005, 11:51:48 PM
Wow, I'd love to hear this as a song. It's beautiful.

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<Wordhack> Darn it. I liked my phylosophy better. The fanfic masturbation thing.
~dreaminginmetaphors:icondreaminginmetaphors: Dec 22, 2005, 11:34:49 PM
It's good to see you putting some new stuff together. I really like your word choice here, you do a nice job of avoiding that predictability that you seem to despise so much in most of today's lyricists. Bien hecho, mi amigo.
~dragonsbait:icondragonsbait: Jan 3, 2006, 11:35:40 PM
i really love this.

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a documentary?
yeah. it's like a movie. only boring.
~UnspokenRequest:iconUnspokenRequest: Jan 4, 2006, 4:54:05 PM
Thanks.

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Dancing in plastic shake-up snow,
Do you believe in what you want?
~ChimericalDestitute:iconChimericalDestitute: Jan 16, 2006, 8:24:14 PM
I miss writing. You inspire me. This is a beautiful piece. I can see you have grown since last I spoke to you. It's nice to see your progression. You have got some amazing talent. Run with it.

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"The present alone was significant; was hers, to torture her as it was doing then with the biting conviction that she had lost that which she had held, that she had been denied that which her impassioned, newly awakened being demanded."
~UnspokenRequest:iconUnspokenRequest: Jan 18, 2006, 10:41:57 AM
Thanks, Liz. I miss you writing stuff. It was always nice to see your new work. How are things looking for next year? Weren't you hoping to head to BC?

I appreciate your input as always.

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Dancing in plastic shake-up snow,
Do you believe in what you want?